Well, I managed putting some other jokes in Akane and Usopp's dialogue. But then it turned all angsty and I had no clue on how to end it. (Hey, if you'd want to take a look at it some day it would make me pretty happy. Even if it can't be salvaged, I'd enjoy having at least one more person see it. If you can't stand Akane you might not like it, though.)

I'm very glad you like my comments. And you know, I do lame-ass typos too. Frequently in comments. (Wait, maybe I've said that before? Well, still true anyway.) Not to mention stupid formatting mistakes. XD Hence my own wish for beta.

I don't know how Google Documents works, though. I could look them up, I guess...I've done all my prereading through e-mails before. (Could PM you my e-mail address if you want it.)