It's great if it sounds IC, that's what I was going for! The story itself could use more plot and polishing, but maybe that just makes it more believable as something partially improvised - well, I hope so anyway. ^_^ Very glad you liked it! (I was inspired by Naye's fill of the prompt "Stars").
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Date: 2009-11-15 09:59 pm (UTC)