After months and months since the last chapter, I’ve finally managed to complete another one of
“Fine” "Absence". Hopefully not everyone has forgotten it by now. Constructive criticism is very welcome, as always (but don’t expect me to change the way I spell Zoro’s family name). This one turned out rather long, so I’ll split it up into three posts (it also divides itself like that naturally with POV shifts).
Many many thanks to
tonko - thrice over! - and
wendytigges for their splendid beta. Any remaining faults are my fault alone.
Working Title:
“Fine”, chapter six – I am increasingly unhappy with this too-ironic title, and I’ve been wracking my brain to come up with a better one, but no luck so far "Absence", chapter six (title change in Feb. 2010)
Previous chapters: Chapter One
here, fic tag
here; the whole fic on AO3
here Here’s
Chapter Five, which also links to all former chapters.
Rating: PG here; PG-13 in Chapter One. (All for violence, mentions of death etc: no sex here)
Pairing: None
Characters: All the Strawhats
Spoilers/setting: I think of this as taking place some time in the future, after the current arc (Impel Down) and other unknown future events.
Genre: Serious angst; deathfic
Summary/what has gone before: Originates from a request on the anonfic thread
op_fanforall, asking for angstfic in which Luffy has to deal with Usopp being dead. He's not dealing with it very well, so far - in fact he's taken to a selective amnesia, forgetting Usopp ever existed. The rest of the crew feel they can't take this anymore and have decided to turn the ship around and go back to the island where it happened, without Luffy's knowledge.
Warning: Not only is this very heavy on angst, but it’s also
very much a WIP – I’m not yet sure where the story will end up. I’m striving for something hopeful, but I cannot honestly promise I will be able to deliver it. Guilt over this is why I haven’t crossposted about this story to
one_piece.
Also warning for author's stubborn use of alternative (Swedish) spelling of Zoro’s surname (Lolonoa) when it comes up.
( An unforeseen encounter )Chapter Six continues
here with Part 2 (of three).