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Since this story took such an unholy long time (and energy) to write, I thought I could indulge myself with an afterword of sorts.

Behind the cut. Manga spoilers ahoy )
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This is the final instalment. For disclaimer, content warnings, spoiler warnings etc, see previous chapters. I will post an afterword right after this.

Feedback devoutly to be wished for.

Title: Absence, chapter 14: Epilogue

Link to the fic on AO3.
Fic's tag here on Dreamwidth

Epilogue: On )
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Title: Absence, chapter 13. Part 3 of 3.
Continued from Absence, Chapter 13, part 2. For disclaimer, warning and more info, see that part. Forward-dated to avoid f-list spamming.

Pieces of Eight, part 3 )
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Title: Absence, chapter 13. Part 2 of 3.
Continued from Absence, Chapter 13, part 1. For disclaimer, warning and more info, see that part. Forward-dated to avoid f-list spamming.

Pieces of Eight, part 2 )
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Forward-dated to avoid f-list clogging. This chapter is pretty big, so it's divided up in three parts here due to LJ's restrictions on posting length.

Beta most kindly provided by the glorious [livejournal.com profile] tonko_ni, but when it comes to remaining errors, the bucket stops here with me.

Note: this whole chapter is in present tense.

Title: Absence, chapter 13, part 1 (of 3)
Previous chapters: Chapter One here, Fic tag here; the whole fic on AO3 here.
Rating: PG for language and dark themes

Pieces of Eight: part one )
Continued in part 2
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Forward-dated to avoid f-list clogging. This chapter is relatively short, but the next one will make up for it by being frigging huge. Betaed by the indefatigable [livejournal.com profile] tonko_ni, but any remaining mistakes are my fault alone.

Title: Absence, chapter 12
Previous chapters: Chapter One here, fic tag here; the whole fic on AO3 here
Rating: PG for language and dark themes
Warning For major angst and sadness
Summary: Usopp has been killed in battle. The crew tries their best to cope with it.
Characters: Strawhats
Spoilers/setting: Despite being a divergent AU, spoilers up to and including chapter 598 (for everything that's not divergent)

Second Council )
To be continued in chapter 13 part 1
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Forward-dated to avoid f-list clogging. Betaed by the magnificent [livejournal.com profile] tonko_ni: remaining errors are wholly my fault. Nitpicks and other feedback extremely welcome.

Title: Absence, chapter 11
Previous chapters: Chapter One here, fic tag here; the whole fic on AO3 here
Rating: PG for language and dark themes
Warning For major angst and sadness
Summary: Usopp has been killed in battle. The crew tries their best to cope with it.
Characters: Strawhats
Spoilers/setting: Despite being a divergent AU, spoilers up to and including chapter 598 (for everything that's not divergent)

Kabuto )
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Title: Absence, chapter 10. Part two.
Continued from Absence, Chapter 10, part 1. For disclaimer, warning and more info, see that part. Forward-dated to avoid f-list spamming.

The Truth. Part two )

- To be continued in Chapter 11
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Well. So.

I finished the fic "Absence" and am now ready to post the remaining chapters, not without trepidation.

NOTE: Subsequent parts will be forward-dated to avoid spamming of f-lists. I'll probably go with one fictitious day between each part. However, all the chapters are available on my journal as well as on ffnet (or will be in a few minutes, as I write this), and I shall also post to AO3 (= Archive Of Our Own) soonish.

I doubt this would ever have been concluded if not for the truly invaluable help of my wonderful beta [personal profile] tonko. She is much to be praised and credited. Remaining errors are my own responsibility, however! Constructive criticism is as always welcome: while I may not rewrite the fic now except for minor corrections, good criticism can be kept in mind for future stories.


Title: Absence, chapter 10, part 1 (of 2)
Previous chapters: Chapter One here, fic tag here; the whole fic on AO3 here
Rating: PG for language and dark themes
Warning For major angst and sadness
Summary: Usopp has been killed in battle. The crew tries their best to cope with it.
Characters: Strawhats

The Truth. Part 1 )

Continues in Chapter 10, part 2
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Title: Absence, chapter 9. Part two.
Continued from Chapter 9, part 1. For disclaimer, warning and more info, see that part.

9.2 - the wall crumbles )
- To be continued in Chapter 10: The Truth
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Here's chapter 9 of my ever-so-slow-going-but-certainly-not-abandoned WIP Absence. Assuming my plan holds, there is now only two chapters and a possible epilogue to go.

This is now a divergence AU and has been so since February last year when manga chapter 574 came out. Here, events at Marineford happened differently (for details, see chapter 7, part 1 with spoilers for the real events), which in turn makes this Luffy a somewhat different person than he is in canon now – maybe not quite as mature under the surface (though events at Sabaody were still the same).

Concrit is, as always, very welcome.

Very big thanks go to [personal profile] tonko, who's gone way over and above normal beta duties for this one - besides all her usual tireless edits, she was firm and clear when pointing out where I'd gotten quite a bit off-track for one scene. Then she patiently helped me through my subsequent block and confusion with excellent suggestions that I was happy to pick up and use when rewriting the scene. ♥♥♥


Title: Absence, chapter 9, part 1/2
Previous chapters: Chapter One here, fic tag here; the whole fic on AO3 here
Rating: PG for language and dark themes; part 2 PG-13 for even coarser language
Warning For major angst and sadness
Summary: The crew copes with loss. Luffy doesn’t take it well (for more, see the ‘What has gone before’ section right behind the cut).
Characters: Strawhats

What has gone before )

chapter 9.1: Arrival )

On to Part Two
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Title: Absence, chapter 8. Part two.
Continued from Chapter 8, part 1. For disclaimer, warning and more info, see that part.

8.2: nothing to cling to )

--To be Continued in Chapter Nine
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Chapter 8 of my longest (and slowest, and saddest) fic is finished now. Here's the first part of two.

As noted when chapter 7 was posted, this is now a Divergence AU. Events happened differently at Marineford (for details see chapter 7, part 1, with spoilers for the real Marineford arc).

This chapter has been betaed by [personal profile] tonko, to whom I am very much obliged for her much-needed efforts. Any remaining errors are my responsibility alone. Nitpicks and other forms of concrit are much appreciated! ♥

I believe I'm finally ready to crosspost this fic to [livejournal.com profile] one_piece. While I still haven't ironed out all the wrinkles in the plot yet, now it feels as if the ending is at least in sight, if still a few chapters away. I know... famous last words... *knocks on wood*

Title: Absence, chapter 8, part 1
Previous chapters: Chapter One here, fic tag here; the whole fic on AO3 here
Rating: PG for language and dark themes
Warning For major angst and sadness
Summary: The crew copes with loss. Luffy doesn’t take it well (for more, see the ‘What has gone before’ section right behind the cut).
Characters: Strawhats

What has gone before )

8.1: the last few days of sailing )
Chapter continues in Part 2
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Title: Absence, chapter 7. Part two
Disclaimer, warning and more info: See Chapter 7, part one. (Beware of spoiler for Marineford arc behind the cut in that entry).

A familiar stranger )
-- Continues in Chapter 8, part one
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Uh. So. Those of you who may remember my ongoing grief-fic might reasonably have wondered if I’ve abandoned it. It’s been... *counts on fingers* er... *cough* ...let’s just say way, way too many months since Chapter 6 was posted. Especially since I claimed back then Chapter 7 probably wouldn’t take so long. >_< I could go on explaining/apologising/excusing myself (there were birthdays and Christmas and other stories to write but chiefly there was that magnificent bastard Oda with his canon angst completely throwing me off ) but there’s little use in it. Anyway. Chapter 7 is finally here.

Some things of note: I’ve changed the name of the story from the working title “Fine” to “Absence”.

I’ve also definitely decided this is a Divergence Fic. Without spoiling anything, this takes place in an AU version where everything up through the end of Impel Down happened the same way, but the Marineford arc ended differently (more details behind the cut – avoid if you’re not up-to-date on the manga).

Also, there was a reference to Blackbeard in the flashback in Chapter 1 which I’ve removed due to power level differences.

This chapter has been betaed by the priceless and indefatigable [personal profile] tonko and [livejournal.com profile] wendytigges, to which loads and loads of my gratitude go. Any remaining errors are my responsibility alone. Concrit much welcome and encouraged.

Title: Absence, chapter 7, part 1 (part 2 to be posted now as well)
Previous chapters: Chapter One here, fic tag here; the whole fic on AO3 here.
Chapter 6, the previous chapter, started here, but it’s in three parts.
See the fic's tag for more chapters, like this: https://rainsometimes.dreamwidth.org/tag/fic:+absence
Rating: PG for language and dark themes
Warning For major angst and sadness
Summary: The crew copes with loss. Luffy doesn’t take it well (for more, see the ‘What has gone before’ section right behind the cut).
Characters: Strawhats
Pairing: None

Luffy vs Nami )
(Continued in Chapter 7, part 2)
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Concludes chapter six of "Fine" "Absence" from here. First part of Chapter 6 is here, where you can find more information about this angsty deathfic.

negotiation )
To be continued in Chapter 7, part one
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Continues from the first part of Chapter Six: see this entry for more information about the story. Warning for major angst and character death.

not feeling anything )
Continued here with the end of Chapter 6.
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After months and months since the last chapter, I’ve finally managed to complete another one of “Fine” "Absence". Hopefully not everyone has forgotten it by now. Constructive criticism is very welcome, as always (but don’t expect me to change the way I spell Zoro’s family name). This one turned out rather long, so I’ll split it up into three posts (it also divides itself like that naturally with POV shifts).

Many many thanks to [personal profile] tonko - thrice over! - and [livejournal.com profile] wendytigges for their splendid beta. Any remaining faults are my fault alone.

Working Title: “Fine”, chapter six – I am increasingly unhappy with this too-ironic title, and I’ve been wracking my brain to come up with a better one, but no luck so far "Absence", chapter six (title change in Feb. 2010)
Previous chapters: Chapter One here, fic tag here; the whole fic on AO3 here
Here’s Chapter Five, which also links to all former chapters.
Rating: PG here; PG-13 in Chapter One. (All for violence, mentions of death etc: no sex here)
Pairing: None
Characters: All the Strawhats
Spoilers/setting: I think of this as taking place some time in the future, after the current arc (Impel Down) and other unknown future events.
Genre: Serious angst; deathfic
Summary/what has gone before: Originates from a request on the anonfic thread [livejournal.com profile] op_fanforall, asking for angstfic in which Luffy has to deal with Usopp being dead. He's not dealing with it very well, so far - in fact he's taken to a selective amnesia, forgetting Usopp ever existed. The rest of the crew feel they can't take this anymore and have decided to turn the ship around and go back to the island where it happened, without Luffy's knowledge.

Warning: Not only is this very heavy on angst, but it’s also very much a WIP – I’m not yet sure where the story will end up. I’m striving for something hopeful, but I cannot honestly promise I will be able to deliver it. Guilt over this is why I haven’t crossposted about this story to [livejournal.com profile] one_piece.

Also warning for author's stubborn use of alternative (Swedish) spelling of Zoro’s surname (Lolonoa) when it comes up.

An unforeseen encounter )
Chapter Six continues here with Part 2 (of three).
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Title: Fine Absence, Chapter 5
Rating: PG
Pairing: None
Characters: All the Strawhats
Spoilers/setting: I think of this as taking place some time in the future, after the current arc (Impel Down) and other unknown future events.
Genre: Serious angst; deathfic
Summary/what has gone before: This fic comes from a prompt on [livejournal.com profile] op_fanforall asking for angstfic in which Luffy has to deal with Usopp being dead. He's not dealing with it very well, so far, in fact he's got a selective amnesia, forgetting Usopp ever existed. The rest of the crew feel they can't take this any more and have decided to turn the ship around and go back to the island where it happened, without Luffy's knowledge.

edit in Feb. 2010: Title change.

Previous parts: Chapter One, Chapter Two, Chapter Three,
Chapter Four.
Fic tag on Dreamwidth.
Note: Betaed by [personal profile] tonko and [livejournal.com profile] wendytigges, who are wonderful and severely cool. Any remaining errors are my fault alone. Constructive criticism and other feedback is highly encouraged.

In which Franky suspects something, and Sanji tries a new tack )

edit: The story continues in Chapter Six.
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New chapter of "Fine" "Absence". Or newly revised for those who may have seen the first draft on [livejournal.com profile] op_fanforall ages ago. Again, warning for character death and very strong angst.

Edit as of Feb. 2010: Title change.

Title: Absence, Chapter 4
Rating: PG
Pairing: None
Characters: All the Strawhats
Spoilers/setting: I think of this as taking place some time in the future, after the current arc (Impel Down) and other unknown future events.
Genre: Serious angst; deathfic
Summary/what has gone before: This comes from a prompt on [livejournal.com profile] op_fanforall asking for angstfic in which Luffy has to deal with Usopp being dead. He's not dealing with it very well, so far, in fact he's got a selective amnesia, forgetting Usopp ever existed. In the last chapter, the crew, not able to take this anymore, decided to turn the ship around and go back to the island where it happened, without Luffy's knowledge.

Note: As with earlier chapters, this revised version has been extensively betaed by [personal profile] tonko and [livejournal.com profile] wendytigges and is much the better for it. Any remaining errors are solely my own fault. Constructive criticism and other feedback is highly encouraged.

Previous parts: Chapter One, Chapter Two, Chapter Three. See Chapter One for disclaimer.

Night thoughts )

Continues in Chapter Five

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