follow me into the rain

Sudden attempt at two Ginzura tanka. I guess spring is affecting me... Warning for sappiness.

1. (Gintoki's POV)
On this quiet sidestreet,
Golden blossoms on the trees,
Against your black hair.
No radio waves - Danger!
I want to kiss you right now...

2. (Katsura's POV - Not the same moment, but perhaps the same spring)

A hanami picnic,
with the White Yaksha dozing,
petals in your hair.
Strange, peaceful happiness.
May this gentle moment last...